We’re seven pages in now, and these four seem to be having fun! Of the submitted scripts I really only felt like one was a natural continuation of the events so far, though there was some submitted stuff I expect will come up soon in future pages.
Here’s page five of our monthly SubscribeStar Bi Ongoing! There were only two scripts submitted for this month, which were fairly similar to one another, but I did my best to pull from both as we move into the real meat of this comic.
We ended up with a rather oral-focused page this time around. A couple of the scripts I got had panels focusing on Bulma stripping Vegeta, but I had to skip the armor-removing stage of that just ’cause it looked a bit too silly however I tried it. Even though this page doesn’t move things forward too much, I kinda like the relaxed pace here. Now that everyone’s naked, I kinda expect the next few pages to escalate relatively quickly.
So, now that Coed Capers is done, we’ve begun a new Bi/Pan Ongoing comic. The Subscribers voted to see a foursome with these Dragon Ball characters this time. Normally you’d expect to see Chi-Chi in this situation, but she wasn’t available due to her role in the previous Straight Ongoing. I think having 18 in this situation instead does make for an interesting twist on a dynamic I’ve seen done quite a bit, so hopefully we’ll get some fun pages for this one in the future.