Here now with our third page of the yuri ongoing we’re delving into the action properly. Of the two scripts submitted for this page, I ended up mostly leaning on one for action while pulling dialogue from the other. Like our last beach yuri comic we get a panel of a character standing over another, which you might consider a callback.
Here’s the second page to our ongoing yuri comic, Galactic Getaway! In this page we move to the location where the rest of the comic will take place, an unspecified alien beach. Since this isn’t based on any specific location from Dragon Ball, I tried to make the colors interesting while also keeping it recognizable as a beach. Since our last yuri comic also took place on a beach I wanted to try and make sure the vibe here didn’t feel too repetitive, but we’ll see how it goes. At the end of the day we’re still dealing with sand, ocean, and a little towel for our girls to have fun on.
Since Beerus got fucked by Goku and Vegeta at once in that Scenario, it seemed right that Broly would be his partner for the follow-up. When these two interact in fan content, it’s usually in the context of Beerus cucking Broly, I believe. While I’m down for that, and I’ve drawn Beerus with Cheelai before, I thought a different dynamic might be fun to explore here.
So Corey and Loren don’t really have much in common. Even within the Applebridge canon they’re removed by the tax brackets of their parents, plus Corey’s like three or four years older than Loren. Still, I thought there could be some fun in highlighting how different they are, especially since Corey recently made acquaintances with someone who’s way more Loren’s type. As for Corey’s partner here, I couldn’t think of anyone tied to Loren who would fit (unfortunately Loren doesn’t have a grandma or anything who’s been introduced), so I instead partnered him with someone I’ve meant to pair him with for a while but never had a good chance to.










