Page four! Like with all of the SubscribeStar Ongoings, this comic was written using ideas submitted by Subscribers! Now that Vegeta’s fully on board, we can move on into the meat of the comic.
We ended up with a rather oral-focused page this time around. A couple of the scripts I got had panels focusing on Bulma stripping Vegeta, but I had to skip the armor-removing stage of that just ’cause it looked a bit too silly however I tried it. Even though this page doesn’t move things forward too much, I kinda like the relaxed pace here. Now that everyone’s naked, I kinda expect the next few pages to escalate relatively quickly.
This is one with maybe a boring answer, but one I thought some folks might like to see. I don’t get to do just Vegeta and Goku by themselves that often, after all.
There were a few interesting Dares to choose from this month, but this one stood out to me for a couple reasons. One is that I just did a redheaded tomboy getting spitroasted by these two for a One-Shot, but another is that we’ve never had someone do a second Dare yet and I thought it was time. Now, obviously here Tomo’s not getting, like, hardcore dominated, much to her chagrin, but I kind of like this dynamic. To Goku and Vegeta, Tomo is spirited but still not able to take something like what Android 18 did from them in her Dare, but to Tomo they’re treating her lightly and ruining the challenge of her Dare.
This is the second page of our Bi Ongoing. Following up from last time, Goku joins the girls in trying to convince Vegeta to loosen up and have some fun with them.
Like last month’s winner, this One-Shot script is a sequel of sorts to a previous one. In that one we saw a variety of characters in the Studio gym, but this time we focus just on A-ko as she pairs with a handful of different characters. Since this was the October script, it was specified that it should be “after hours”, hence the darker color palette than last time.
So, now that Coed Capers is done, we’ve begun a new Bi/Pan Ongoing comic. The Subscribers voted to see a foursome with these Dragon Ball characters this time. Normally you’d expect to see Chi-Chi in this situation, but she wasn’t available due to her role in the previous Straight Ongoing. I think having 18 in this situation instead does make for an interesting twist on a dynamic I’ve seen done quite a bit, so hopefully we’ll get some fun pages for this one in the future.
I guess he didn’t have much to say for this one beyond an affirmative. I thought Todoroki getting Saiya-jin dick from both ends sounded kinda fun, so here we are. Guess I don’t have much to say, either.
I liked the idea of this Dare, because I think 18 would take it as a personal challenge. I don’t have too much to add here, since I think it’s pretty straightforward, but I liked the idea of 18 angrily berating Goku and Vegeta to fuck her harder throughout the dare.
This Ask is referencing an old commission from this Subscriber I titled “Beef Sandwich“, where Kirishima was spitroasted by Goku and Vegeta. I thought it might be cute if we saw a logical conclusion to a scene like that, with Kirishima making some puns inspired by the title.