Here now with our third page of the yuri ongoing we’re delving into the action properly. Of the two scripts submitted for this page, I ended up mostly leaning on one for action while pulling dialogue from the other. Like our last beach yuri comic we get a panel of a character standing over another, which you might consider a callback.


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Well, they are enjoying themselves together at the public beach. I can’t even wait for the next page.
Saiyan pussies are my weakness