Here’s our third page for this comic, and I promise this will be the last dialogue-focused page. Sorry about the gap between releases, but I hope y’all will continue enjoying this one as we move forward.
Here’s page five of our monthly SubscribeStar Bi Ongoing! There were only two scripts submitted for this month, which were fairly similar to one another, but I did my best to pull from both as we move into the real meat of this comic.
The winning script for the November One-Shot focuses on two of the main ships in Fairy Tail. The script called for some unspecified dialogue in the last panel, and I did my best to write something that fits them even though I have only a passing familiarity with the characters. Hopefully everything here feels on-brand.
So a long time ago I saw a PMV that was titled something along the line of “The Grave of Teenage Asses”. It was just a bunch of teen anal porn set to, like, dubstep or something, and I don’t remember the PMV itself being particularly interesting or memorable. The title, however, I found strangely evocative, and I think about it sometimes. I decided to just kinda steal it (I’ve seen this crop up in a few places, and I don’t even think the PMV I saw was the originator of it). So this is a little series I think I’ll do occasionally, just taking a cute teen character and giving them some hardcore anal. I’m using a rather popular one to kick it off here in Deku, and I hope y’all will like it. I don’t know when I’ll do the next one, but we’ll see.
Here’s page five of Beach Treat! I don’t think there’s much I can say about this page right now, but I tried to keep the story moving in a reasonable direction with the scripts I had. It felt like some ideas were eager to jump to a point that didn’t feel natural to me from where we were, and I hope those Subscribers don’t get discourage that their ideas didn’t show up here. I’m not against them, but I don’t want to force them in just to move the comic in that direction. I think this page flows naturally from the last, and I’m curious to see where we go from here.
Like last month’s, we’ve got an actually consistently-themed One-Shot for October! This time we’re seeing Faye paired with a bunch of characters from Cowboy Bebop, although some of them don’t really make much sense in canon. We’re getting a lot more Bebop rep in the Studio through this one, though, so I hope people like it. The Subscriber who submitted this script also had a Faye/Edward Mini Commission on the docket, so I used their idea for them there for the first panel here. That allows me to make it more of a scene (since I can show both of them more fully), which I hope they won’t mind.