This script for page four is a fairly even hybrid between two that were submitted, I think. There were a couple things I liked in the submitted scripts that didn’t feel right to fit in here, but I think will make sense in page five from where we left off. Monthly Ongoings are four-panel comics, but I kinda split the third panel in two. This was my decision to try and convey more action clearly, and I feel fine justifying it since the shots are so up-close. Hope y’all enjoy.
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Wow, nice. Looks like they’ve picked up a few things at the beach and are getting ready to give in to their desires.